Treetops by Peter Bremer - Book Tour + Giveaway
Chapter 9
Jackie sat
hunched over in disbelief. She couldn't believe her brother was gone. For the
longest time she just stared at the last place Dustin had been before he
disappeared. Tears flowed down her cheeks, but it felt as if someone else were
crying them. When they finally subsided, she felt empty inside. No thoughts of
anger or worry stirred within her. The expected panic did not rise from her
gut. She formulated no plan of action. There was nothing for her to do since
she couldn’t accept that it had really happened.
"What is
this," she murmured numbly, "some kind of fairy tale?”
"That is the
stupidest thing I've ever heard," retorted a voice harshly.
Jackie turned
around in slow motion and for a moment, saw nothing. Then she looked down.
There was the creature again. It was the same strange bird that had appeared at
the foot of the tree. Perhaps she hadn’t imagined it after all.
The creature was
much bigger than a turkey and decidedly more plump. Blue-gray plumage covered
it like a tacky carpet. Its over-sized head sported a black bill ending in a
reddish sheath that tapered off unmercifully to a hooked tip. Along each side
of its body was a small, useless wing that looked like it had been put there as
some sort of cosmic joke. Bearing the brunt of all this absurdity were two
stout yellow legs. It was, without a doubt, a dodo bird, with a few unexpected
abilities; namely that it had an attitude and was speaking to her again.
"Listen,
deary," the bird continued, leveling its BB-sized pupils directly at her.
With every word, the ridiculous creature managed to convey a sound directly
opposite to birdsong.
"I'm no
Cheshire cat as you can plainly see and no Prince Charming is going to ride in
on his steed to save the day. The boy is gone and if he isn't dead already,
he'll soon wish he was. There is no escaping where he's been taken."
"I'm afraid
Regnal's right," said a man’s voice. It sounded like the wind rattling
through October leaves; tired, coming at the end of the season.. "There's
nothing we can do."
As Jackie
watched, his form seemed to materialize from the wispy surroundings as if it
were taking shape from some greater mystery. In front of her eyes, the shifting
cloud canvas became a patchwork cloak of morning glories and creeping green
vines that ended in a multitude of filigree roots. These in turn disappeared
into the white clouds at his feet. On his head was a crown of bristlecone-pine
with one small flower, a violet, growing from his forehead through the tangle.
The only place
that wasn't covered with living green growth was on his face and hands.
His skin was
weathered. His fingers were knotted and bark-like and were wrapped tightly
around a gnarled staff of wood. Deep lines, rivulets of time, stretched across
his cheeks and under his eyes like tectonic struggles she could not begin to
fathom. A long, thin beard the color of the mottled clouds covered his chin
like a retreating glacier on a rock-strewn mountaintop. But it was the
stranger's mouth and eyes that held her the most, for it was these alone that
seemed to contain his essence. The former drooped like a flower gone to seed,
but his eyes, sunk beneath frosty brows, still sparkled like deep pools of
secret blue water.
"Who has
taken him? Where is he?" she asked.
"Gaylon has
taken him," explained the leafy figure with a touch of sadness.
"Gaylon the
Black," corrected the dodo bird. "Taken him to Flood and the
Arkanum."
The tall figure
nodded solemnly like a tree bowing to the wind.
"Oh,"
mouthed Jackie, trying to stay afloat, but it was all too much, and she was
drowning, becoming as tenuous as the clouds which swirled at her feet. When her
legs gave way and she slipped into blessed oblivion it seemed like the next
best thing to a happy ending.
Jackie
awoke with a sudden start, her body rigid as if she had just fallen to the
ground.
Long strands of
hair covered her face and she brushed them away. The first thing she saw when
she opened her sleep-encrusted eyes was a gnarled old man covered in living
growth. His face, as he leaned over her, was riddled with concern.
"So you're
awake. Welcome back," the canopy of leaves said with undisguised relief.
"You had a
quite a rest."
It was the
strange leafy figure from her storybook dream. A dream she was evidently still
having.
“We’ve been expecting
you.”
But Jackie barely
heard him. She barely saw him. Struggling to sit up, she at once began looking
around frantically. There was something very important that she was supposed to
do, but for the life of her she couldn’t remember. Nothing she saw reassured
her.
"This isn't
my bedroom," she said. "And this most definitely isn't my
house."
Everything she
saw was utterly wrong. She was in some kind of living enclosure. The walls were
branches intertwined into undulating angles, an uneven sphere. Rising to her
feet from a bed of sweet-smelling grass, she stared up at the ceiling only to
find there was none.
Instead, a
multitude of stars blinked back at her amidst a ring of celestial blackness.
"Where am
I?" she exclaimed as something light and nimble ran across her feet.
Looking down,
Jackie saw a squirrel the color of fallen snow scamper across the dirt strewn
floor. From a string tied around its neck dangled a single silver coin. As she
watched the creature slowly circled her in ever decreasing arcs until it was
wrapped, bushy tail.
“You feel real,”
murmured Jackie, not trusting her senses.
At those words
the albino squirrel rested its furry nose atop her shoe and closed its eyes.
"It is a
good sign," said the leaf covered old man with more hope than conviction.
"It is a
sign we are not completely lost," said the dodo next to him.
"Nothing more.
Optimism is still
close to extinction."
"What is
this place?" asked Jackie, nervously looking around.
They both turned
toward her. The man-sized leaf pile raised his mossy eyebrows in surprise.
"My manners
and my senses desert me in these dark days,” he said apologetically.
“Please accept my
condolences for your loss, Jackie. We have not been properly introduced. My
name is Nimbus. I am the Keeper here, and this," he paused gesturing down
to the clump of unruly feathers, "is Regnal. You must not take any great
offense at him. The napping creature at your feet is called Pence. You are in
HeartWood, my home of sorts. Be welcome.”
He paused.
“We have been
expecting a visit from a child of Jillian."
Jackie looked
back dumbfounded.
"Is this
some kind of joke?"
“I wish it were,”
replied Nimbus gravely. “So much pain and effort could be avoided.”
“You’re not
making any sense,” Jackie replied. “How do you know so much about me? I didn’t
know I was coming until I got here.”
Obscured behind
leaf and twig, the Keeper's eyes darted over to Regnal as if asking a secret
question before responding.
"Most find
us by intent rather than by accident," he replied carefully. "They
come when it is time if they have the talent. Children receive many gifts from
their mothers. Jillian had much to give. She was one of my best students."
“You mean she was
here?” Jackie asked in disbelief. “What did she do? How long was she
here?”
“Questions,
questions,” chided the Keeper. “So many questions. All in good time, yes?
For now, let me
merely say that Pence is my eyes and ears of the world below, and he is
infinitely more reliable than that gossipy rodent you saw on your way up here.”
Jackie remembered
the blazing squirrel alight on the branches of the great tree. It had been the
only creature visible during her ascent.
“Ratatosk,”
Nimbus was saying, “has a wagging tongue of flame, capable of spreading
mischief faster than a wildfire. Pence favors me with his careful observations
when it suits him, and they are invaluable, yet I would have to be blind and
even more senile not to notice that you have your mother’s eyes and spirit.”
Jackie nodded,
acknowledging the compliment while another part of her slipped away. It was all
too much. In truth, she barely listened. Instead she shrunk into herself, retreating
to a safer place where things made more sense.
“If I may,”
continued the Keeper, “allow me to ask one question of you. What talent do you
possess?”
“I’m not sure
what you mean. Mom said I was a really good gardener and I ace all of my
spelling tests.”
A troubled look
passed over the Keeper’s face.
“Did your mother
have a chance to talk with you about this place before she passed,”
Nimbus asked
gently.
A familiar
sadness wormed its way into Jackie’s voice and she shook her head.
“We’re doomed,”
Regnal proclaimed. “She’s as useless as my wings.”
“There’s no sense
jumping to conclusions,” the Keeper countered, but it seemed a half-hearted
response.
As if raising a
battered shield, Jackie covered her face with her hands and closed her eyes.
"I know its
lame, but would someone please tell me if I’m dreaming," she murmured.
"There she
goes again," Regnal remarked.
Ignoring his
flightless servant, Nimbus shambled over. Jackie watched him through the slits
of her fingers as he gingerly reached into the midsection of his forest growth
where a stomach should be. She imagined him pulling out one of his internal
organs (if he had any) or some jungle monster from the dark depths. With
trepidation, she steeled herself as a rustling of leaves and feathers became a
pair of alabaster wings. In fascination and horror, she watched as a mourning
dove alighted on his shoulder.
"Isn't this
better than a dream?" he said with a glimmer of a smile.
Then he reached a
leafy hand out to touch her shoulder.
Jackie flinched
in sudden terror.
"Get away
from me," she warned rising to her feet, startling and dislodging her
furry freeloader. "Whatever you are, leave me alone."
Her tone was
defiant and yet the remnants of her inner strength were crumbling fast. So much
had happened and she didn’t know how to make sense of it all. She needed help.
"I have to
find my brother,” she said as tears welled up in the corners of her eyes.
Turning, rather
than be seen by whoever or whatever it was, she started walking away.
Soon she was
running across the mossy floor towards the edge of the enclosure looking for a
way out. But whichever way she turned, she could not see a door or an opening
which might let her pass. The tangle of wood and leaf was complete. All around
her the air seemed stagnant and stale as if the weight of time accumulated
here.
Out of the corner
of her eye she spied, in the center of the room, something that looked like a
window in the floor. With her heart pounding in her chest she made for it, gulping
air as if she couldn’t get enough. It was a raised circle, easily ten feet in
diameter, containing a pool of glasslike liquid. Clouds swirled at her feet but
when she tried to touch them, they were out of reach. Water rippled gently but
the image remained untroubled. It was only then that she noticed the ribbons of
blue and the unmistakable patterns of dusky continents as they coalesced and
drifted into view through the bands of white.
She was looking
down at the Earth.
This was more
than she could take and so she ran again, but this time without purpose.
She needed time,
she needed space, and she needed to escape.
Unseen behind
her, the Keeper raised a leafy digit and traced an invisible circle in midair.
An arched doorway
suddenly appeared where before there had been only an unbroken wall of tightly
woven branches. Fresh air filled her lungs as she plunged down the tunnel-like
exit. For the first time, she realized how rich smelling everything was, how
alive. Branches whizzed past her, tugging at her clothes, scraping at her skin,
and she imagined herself back in the park, scampering through the trees. But
there was no sun visible, only a faint light that broke through the dark wall
of leaves like an afterglow without warming her skin. Layer after layer of foliage dropped away in ever decreasing density until, with a final
wave of her hand, she pulled back the last branch and peered out on a vast
cloudscape valley filled with a multitude of animals beyond counting. It was
like a colossal puzzle with the pieces all jumbled. Overhead a golden and
radiant chariot arced its way across the sky heralding another day.
"Welcome to
Treetops," toned Nimbus from her side as if he had never left it.
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